This builds on last week’s Friday Flash Fiction:
Barbara looked at her daughter. How could she tell her? Oh, Kirsten, by the way, I’ve been living a lie in front of you and Dad all these years?
She winced at the false notion of ‘Dad’ that her husband, her daughter held. What possible good could come from their knowing the truth?
“Mom?”
Am looking forward to reading more of this story. I think you’ve got yourself a good one!
Thanks! Gotta keep plugging away at it….
Yes, this does sound good. I can wait to read the rest. I had the sister’s angle in my head. I never considered Dad’s part in the story.
This is better than an ice cream cone.
Interest piqued! And Shaddy made me laugh. What a cute way to say she likes it. I’ll have to remember that one.
Love it and I am totally interested to find out what happens next!
This whole story is turning out to be way more complicated/complex than I thought it would be originally…. Thanks, all, for making me think it’s worthwhile to keep working with it!