Gulp

I just posted an excerpt of my NaNo novel on my EXCERPT page.  I would love some feedback.  I know it’s hard to dive into the middle of a story, but you’ve already met Libby and Reed in some Flash Fiction 55’s and an earlier excerpt  if you’ve been following along at all.

Anyhow, I would prefer an honest critique to attaboys (or attagirls, as the case may be).  Thanks!!

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